Research and Planning Feedback

A very high-level response from you thus far Niamh.  In order to improve your response - keep your journey to completion  documented throughout this current stage of the process.  Feel free to evidence screen shots of your project and comment on choices in editing being made and provide evidence of post-production timelines,  You could revisit some of your research posts and consider further the appeal of the text to the audience, representation and conventions of genre, remembering to analyse mise-en-scene, sound, editing and use of camera in as much analytical detail as you are capable of.